I'm back with another redesign! Thanks so much to all who commented (whether on the blog, in email, or otherwise) with nice words. I'm really happy you liked the information!
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Today I have another PowerPoint slide from M. My last post was also for a PowerPoint slide, if you missed it. Heeeeeeere we go!
I'm going to touch on some of my changes but not overwhelm you, so please feel free to ask if I don't explain something you're wondering about.
1. There are several directions one can take with the background and design. For simplicity, and to better show the differences, I stuck with basically the same background graphic again. I did some Photoshop things to it in order to resize it for PowerPoint (7.5" x 10"), and I also changed the hue. I felt the blue was a little sterile and uninviting. Since the slide is aimed at people who aren't very computer savvy, I wanted to be sure there was some warmth in the slide so it would create a more cheery and fun association with something they might currently feel is frustrating or dull.
(If I were to spend more time on it and change it more dramatically, I might incorporate a photo with happy adults using a computer in order to give it a more personal and human feel.)
2. I also faded the background a bit and toned down the corner decorations so they wouldn't be stealing attention away from the message.
3. Again, I emphasized the main message of the slide, which is that there are computer classes. I also moved it down because I think it's more comfortable for the viewer when the main point is located closer to just above the middle of the page. (This is something I do subconsciously and never really thought about, but I noticed recently that it's one of my habits with certain pieces. I have a theory on why, but won't overload this post with it.)
5. I put the courses in a setup that more resembles a class schedule, since that's essentially what it is. I think it makes it a little easier to read and understand. One of my main goals in design is to make something easy to understand.
6. Changing the times (2:00-3:00, etc.) to have additional zeroes was mostly to help distinguished them from the dates above. There are times I wouldn't use the zeroes, so it's not about right or wrong. It really depends on the piece.
7. I used gray instead of black because the black seemed too harsh with the soft shades of orange.
8. I made the bottom line in the same orange font as the title mostly to help balance out the slide.
I think those are my main changes. Any questions?
If you have a piece you'd like to submit for me to possibly makeover, please email it to me at jessica @ greengatephoto.com. Thanks!